once upon a time.
a deluded person, had an inspiration.
less of an inspiration, and more of insight, he debated.
it was about stars, chocolates and sunlight.
about tennis, labcoats and milk cartons.
he had an idea, which he thought would change the world
a wonderful idea
a gentle idea
an idea which touched his heart to the core, and shook it.
at that moment
with that thought in his mind
everything, seemed okay
the world wasnt bad
he wasnt lonely
chocolate milkshake couldnt beat strawberry(it still cant)
he was always, a laidback guy
(he always lay-ed in the back and slept)
but this idea,
made him see everything, in a different light
the world was seen in shades of purple, and it seemed great
it was as if his eyes were always closed
and he was groping for the truth
and that idea, had been the truth that he groped for
he groped the air around him
he caught it
he shouted out 'yay'
and then he opened his eyes.
the whole class was staring at him.
he got his attendance cut off for sleeping(and dreaming, and making weird gestures while sleeping) in class
oh, well
life's like that.
at least he still had the idea
wait.
what was the idea again?
damn.
he forgot.
thats why one wise man once said, when you wake up, effing write it down!
oooohh...naice..
ReplyDeleteahem. i hope it ain't a case of selective amnesia.
A good post..
ReplyDeletethere's something to be 'read btn the lines' as well...
U combine truth & life experiences with some humorous events...making it light & digestable.
well, a good read. :)
Dayum!
ReplyDeleteThe number of times I've had great ideas in twilight-sleep..
and the equal number of times that the world has lost out on 'em coz I was too lazy to jump out of bed and write 'em down..
sigh..
ossum possum..i mean, post..;)
and then u go ahead and call it 'white album', too..wowee!
ReplyDeletehahaha.....great post... :)
ReplyDeleteI once composed a song in my sleep....
And the beautiful melody was forgotten when my mom woke me up....
sigh....
(Atleast I didn't sing it out loud!) :P
I dream AWESOME things, only about the present. Actually, linking the past and the present to come up with a COMPLETELY different and VASTLY satisfying reality.
ReplyDeleteBut mostly, I can remember. (HAHA!)
Also, strawberry forever!!!!!!!
...Though, I guess I must add, I dreamt once about this guy, who LOOKS extremely dense, but he said something in my dream, some PROFOUND thing, and I GRINNED! I remember that VIVIDLY - I grinned in my sleep. But, I don't remember what he said. *sigh*
Maybe I'll know it later on..
Though, it's not like he'd tell me. His life revolves around basketball, his dog, and chocolate milkshakes.
:/
don't you cut people up? *DEAD people?*
ReplyDelete:Deluded stare:
Darn!
ReplyDeleteThat is exactly the reason why I am happy (or rather unhappy, er?) with the fact that I sleep minus any dream.
PS: Chocolate milkshake owns all.
@ jinxie
ReplyDeletemore like seductive amnesia ;)
@tj
*bows
@bluey
haha.
the other choice for a header was
'octopus dumplings'
@pavitra
hmmm. I once spoke french in my sleep. my mom says so ;)
@LWAP
haha. you HAVE to stay away from such guys mate.
basketball+dog+chocolate milkshake=poseur!
@jadis
that was waaaay back in 1st year
now theyre live patients!
we just dont cut them ;)
@roopali
yes. i know what you mean.
I get one dream in almost 3 months. but that always lands me trouble ;)
and no, strawberry! :P
Na na!
ReplyDeleteYou haven't completely dipped yourself into the essence of a super-frothy chocolate milkshake!
Chocolate DOES own all.
Trust me, you'll fall in love with it so much so that you'll start placing it higher than sex!
Strawberry doesn't have the charisma..!
@ roopali
ReplyDeletehaha.
if you put it that way ;)
but then again,
I wouldnt mind that ;)
however, you can get overloaded on chocolate, right? its too strong
but strawberry is subtle enough, to be maintained, even if you drink a litre. you cant get overloaded on that!
I think.
A litre of milkshake shouldn't be a harm at all, whatever be the flavor then.Talk about 10 litres.
ReplyDeleteHell yeah, it will for sure burst your stomach. Then, as I have already said, whatever be the flavor!
@ roopali
ReplyDeleteare you sure now?
I tried it once.
got to about 2 litres at a go.
(its expensive bu the way!!)
the next morning, was never the same
;)
medicine teaches us, too much milk, can give your stomach some troubles :)
Hmm..well, go tell that to my mom, PLEASE?
ReplyDeleteShe almost drowns me in it.
Milk is bad.
Milkshake is awesome.
Yeah, it is expensive.
Who cares as long as my dad is paying the bill?
haha.
ReplyDeleteI can really relate to that.
thats how I got around with fruits.
if its not edible, then the best option is to milkshake it!
the parents dont mind that, cause its 'healthy'
Yeah.
ReplyDeleteAlthough I love fruits.
No issues there.
No milk and curd, please! :(
curd.
ReplyDeleteis a funny white thing.
that I dont trust when I see.
but , mishti doi(or whatever the spelling is) is bomb!
No.
ReplyDeleteI don't like that either.
Talk about the great toilet cleaner called 'Pepsi' and am all ears! :D
you laugh at it.
ReplyDeletebut I think its the cheapest stain cleaner Ive ever seen!
if its stained - pour pepsi on it
if it stinks - pour pepsi on it
if you hate that person - pour pepsi on it
its one of my most successful discoveries ;)
Is it?
ReplyDeleteOh shit. I gotta try it the next time!
although if its about pouring stuff on people
ReplyDeleteI think ketchup is the rudest
and water the safest option.
sprite works wonders as well!
Forget ketchup.
ReplyDeleteSwitch to soy sauce.
You'll love it, I bet!
soy sauce is. hmmm. intersting.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you think ;)
which makes you wonder
what ice cream flavour is the best>on someone's clothes
Hmm..
ReplyDeleteIce cream?
The good old 5 ruppee-orange flavored-lick-lolly!
I bet a 1000 on that!
oh. theyre the best.
ReplyDeletealso Im also partial to the 2 rupees ones that come in a tube.
they might not be branded, but by god, the tongue stain stays for a day!
thats great, when you have a tendency to stick out your tongue at every 3rd person you see :)
I don't find the 2Rs ones anymore here in Delhi.
ReplyDelete*Sobs*
oh well, its not that missable
ReplyDeletethe side effect of a day of diarrhoea sure doesnt make it much popular :)
Why do you fall ill so quick?
ReplyDeleteBuild a better immunity.
Falling ill due to every second thing isn't a good sign, I guess.
haha.
ReplyDeleteplease dont say that.
youre not supposed to know more than me!
Im a medical student!
*cries
Oh!
ReplyDeleteBiology?
Grrrr!
I hate it, too!
I guess we gotta come to an end of this charade.
ReplyDelete(If that, in any case, confuses you: the charade of turning our comment pages into chat forums.)
My very lovely mom is forcing me to accompany her to a very boring shopping spree.
Urgh!
I hate shopping.
Is there something I love? :s
milkshakes.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, how could I forget?
ReplyDeletesleepdom :)
ReplyDeleteHmmmmmmmmmmm. Somebody sleeping in class and trying to pretend its a fictional story!! I get it. Haha
ReplyDeletehave tried to steal your style.
ReplyDeletelolz.. i was wondering the whole narration what the idea has to be??
ReplyDeletebut u forgot!! awww....
strawberry milkshake is better than chocolate.
ReplyDeleteand the best is strawberry ice tea.
strawberry cream @ mahabaleshwar even.
But then nothing beats the butterscotch.
or mango?
mango, hmm..
Chocolate anyday! Every drop is orgasmic! hehe..
ReplyDeletebtw.. very nice post.. talk about dreams, I dream crazily,I react crazily to it, and all m left with at the end of it is a mystery, of the forgotten dream!
by the way, hi 5s! I also get attendence cuts because of sleeping, but peacefully, in the class!
Interesting as usual..I am wondering, i see a shift in the mood of your blogs..is it just blogs or yourself ha???
ReplyDelete@truth waali
ReplyDeleteyup. and hey, thanks again!
@zeba
maybe its just fiction ;)
@richa
hmmmm. yup. i wish......
@express
hain?
@preeti:))
is it, really?
*high fives!
@sur
hmm.
really?
what kind of change??
//what was the idea again?
ReplyDeletedamn.
He had the idea.
I have no idea.
//thats why one wise man once said, when you wake up, effing write it down!
Stupid man once said, have ideas and write them down before going to sleep. So no such problems when you wake up
What I usually do!
Good night then.
I'll sleep now!
lol @ thats why one wise man once said, when you wake up, effing write it down!
ReplyDeletei sure do write everything down and sometimes it gets me so in trouble it aint even funnY!
but this is truly a naaaaaaaaaaice share :D
i had a great time reading this one , and more so reading the comments that followed :D !! i'm laughing mad at the moment !!
ReplyDeletei've never slept in class, never!! n i've never spoken while sleeping... i really want 2 see someone do that !!!
psst... milk isn't bad , or is it :(.. i love milk.. !!
Nice post! I'd written a poem--'One moment of clarity', though on a much serious note. :)
ReplyDeleteTC.
@saur
ReplyDeleteyup.
thats why I say that we havent progressed with evolution ;)
@AD
thanks!!!
@tinky
yup. hot milk, with sugar. golden!
@ketan
thanks!
hahahahahahahaha!!!!!
ReplyDeleteman! this is good stuff! innovative, still can totally relate to it!!
Really? And I thought he was just dense! What makes you think that?
ReplyDeleteOh.
ReplyDeleteWere you just kidding?
:/
@arps
ReplyDeletethanks!
and so are you ;)
@LWAP
haha. nope. not kidding
actually that combo is a bit jaded, thats why!